A Weekend With My Granny

On a Friday night, me and my  two brothers called Epeli and Denzel  had a sleepover at my Granny house.

The next Morning my Granny decide to take us to the park. While we were playing, I heard my Granny screamed, Help! Help!.

So we ran over to her and I asked her, “What happened Granny? “She replied in her terrifying voice and said ,looked”.

We looked up and there’s a Huge Spider.

To be continued…

Tony

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  1. To Tony, your work was interesting, but it needs improvement. It had an interesting story-line but it requires correct punctuation.

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