A blinding light scorched the darkness. Had I really just fallen through the ground? I was in an underground forest. The hole in the ground sealed; I couldn’t tell if it was day or night. Suddenly, something cracked. The ground started to shake. I lost my balance. As I fell to the ground, I hit something hard. Remembering I had my phone, I pulled it from my pocket. It was out of battery. There was no getting out now. All of a sudden, there was a noise. Thud. THUD. The noise was SO loud. Then the noise came closer.


6 thoughts on “Darkness.”

  1. Hi Alicia,
    I loved your story,
    If I was in that position I would look all around the place for somewhere to hide,
    Did you find out what the noise was? Did you get away from it or was the noise a monster who was going to have you for dinner?
    Keep up the good work,
    -Kayden, Mrs Boyce’s Class.

  2. Hi Alicia
    I wonder what happened next.
    It reminded me of a movie called treasure of the dark Forrest.
    You should really watch it some time.
    Ewan mrs Boyce’s class.

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