I listened. Silence that’s all I could hear. Then I woke up; I was in a forest all I could see was trees and the mountains. A fox came out. It came up to me. I remembered the spare chicken I had in my pocket. I held it out in my hand. It ate it. I tried to find a way out. The ground began to shake. My heart thumped like mad. There was a massive avalanche. I ran. We were trapped in a dark cave. The noise was SO loud.
By Ceri.
Hi Cheri
That was a brilliant story that I loved
I liked the way you started your story silent and finished loud
It reminded me of a Film called Lost
It got me thinking how did you end up at the forest
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