Mystery

THERE IT WAS IN FRONT OF US. THE BOAT “MYSTERY”. THE OLD BOAT USED TO SAIL IN THE ARMY.”MYSTERY” WOULD CARRY CARGO OVER FROM CHINA TO ENGLAND. OCTOBER THE 26TH, THE WORST DAY OF “MYSTERY’S” LIFE THE WORST DAY OF MY LIFE, THE DAY THAT “MYSTERY”  DISAPEARED. THE BOAT WAS FULL OF GOLD AND TREASURE OF OUT THIS WORLD. THE OWNER SAID “MYSTERY” DIDN’T DISAPEAR; THAT SOMEONE STOLE IT BUT NO ONE BELIVED HIM, THOUGH I DO. THE BOAT WAS STOLEN AND NOW WE HAVE FOUND IT HERE! HOW DID IT GET HERE.

TO BE CONTINUED

Liliana & Nicole

2 thoughts on “Mystery”

  1. I can spot a semi-colon. Well done! (Merit).

    This was a little hard to read because it was all in capitals. As a reader I found it hard to identify the sentences without the capital letters to help me. I couldn’t ‘see the wood for the trees!’

    When we communicate online, typing whole words in capital letters sometimes indicates ‘shouting’. It is best to leave ‘Caps lock’ off!

    It is an interesting read though girls – it raised lots of questions in my mind as I read it!
    Well-done.

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