On toy day Harry was playing with his toys outside his classroom. Harry had to play outside because everyone was shouting. The noise was SO loud that he could hear it from outside. The teacher had to shout and shout; the class kept getting louder and louder. “This noise is SO loud” Harry walked over to the headteacher’s office. Knock knock knock. “Come in.” came a voice from behind the door. “My class is very loud. Can you help me?” “Hmmm.” said the headteacher.
By Alex.
Hello Alex.
This was an interesting story.
I hope the class will be quiet.
I’d like to see a continuation.
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Hi Alex.
Great story.
I dont think i would consider a class as a loud place.
Was there an arguement inside?
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BYE Bryan Mrs Boyces class cork Ireland.
Hi Alex,
I enjoyed reading your story.
Like Harry, I hate when the noise levels rise in class and it gets too loud.
I wonder was the headteacher able to sort it out?
Good work this week.
Mrs Boyce
Cork.
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Hi Alex, great story.
The noise must have been loud.
I wonder if Charlie didn’t like loud noises.
Keep up the good work.
Shane C 5th Mrs. Boyces class.
Hi Alex,
I liked your story,
I wonder how the headteacher dealt with the noise,
Did she roar above everyone? Or did she just have to stand there and wait? – Kayden, Mrs Boyce’s Class.
Hi Alex
That was a good story
I liked the way you used the prompt really well
It reminded me of when I was in Play school when the children were so loud
It got me wondering what day is Toy Day
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Laurynas, Mrs Boyce class
Hi Alex.
Fantastic story.
What did the headteacher do about it?
Great story.
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