“No,” mom screamed, “NOOOOOOOOOOOO!”. Rushing to the noise we cautiously opened several doors that lead to nowhere. We kept running and running till we realised we were going in circles. Only the kitchen and living room remained. We settled for a cup of coco while we took this experience all in. Suddenly it was pitch black. A thick cloud of fog swept beneath our feet. A dummy appeared. we were sure that we had seen it somewhere before. Mum had said that she had dreams about a dummy called Slappy. Slappy smashed a massive lightbulb it exploded with colour…
Ruby-L & Leo
This week’s prompt was:
…so, what lies ahead of…
We had a lot of very creative writing in Darwin this week but, as we are just learning how to write for the one hundred word challenge, we all wrote in our books and Mrs. Evans couldn’t possibly type them all up! In the following weeks, as we learn to blog and write comments, there will be more entries from us to enjoy!
Anyway, here are five excellent entries from our year five and six pupils. Enjoy! We hope that you leave a comment!
“Captain, I am now on Mars. What should I be looking for?”
“Anything that looks like a crystal.”
“I found a crystal. Oh no! What? My oxygen is low!”
“Can you breathe?”
“I am trying to breathe. I am going to try to make it to the ship. Sir, the ship…it has gone…”
“Captain, I am being pulled into something.”
“What is it?”
“I think it is a black hole! Ahhh…”
So, what lies ahead of me in this black hole, I wonder?
One stormy night, a little girl and a cat wanted to go and explore the dark and creepy forest. So off they went into the gloomy forest with millions of eyes watching them. The girl’s name was Charlotte and the cat’s name was Whiskers. Charlotte was terrified but Whiskers kept chasing the eyes everywhere.
Charlotte and Whiskers found a creepy old treehouse but inside there were smashed plates. It looked like a bomb had hit it. They kept hearing banging and screaming. They were really, really worried.
So what lies ahead of Charlotte and Whiskers?
As I entered the gloomy forest, I fell down a tiny hole. Getting up off the floor, something hit my head; the ground above me was disintegrating.
When I woke up, I was covered in mud, but I was somewhere dark. In the corner of my eye, I could see a light flashing at me. I ran as fast as I could the other way but then there was another light; I was trapped. The shadows were coming closer and closer. Suddenly, I screamed! All of a sudden, the lights switched off.
So, what lies ahead of me?