The Boat of Secrets

One night me and my brother Tyson went in the forest, then we saw something it was

Dangerous. Me and my brother went there we saw it and; it was a boat, after me and Tyson went inside the boat we saw amazing things such as golden money and silver money. The next night we found more money and gold when we were going to get it for our selves the lights shine the alarm screamed people came. This people didn’t look like we do they had wooden legs, skin covered in spikes and eyes red.

Dima & Tyson

One thought on “The Boat of Secrets”

  1. Well done for using a sem-colon boys. You can use it instead of the ‘and’:
    Me and my brother went there we saw it; it was a boat.
    God try at using some tricky punctuation!

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