The Shape

When I went outside in my field, I walked across the grass.I felt something move underneath me, so I ran back home then I went into the shed to get a spade. When I ran back up the field I started to dig into the ground so I could see what was underneath. As I went deeper and deeper into the ground, I finally found something. I pulled out what was under the ground. It was  square and it was the colour green. As I looked down into the ground I heard a strange sound. As I turned around it changed shape, it changed into a circle which was red. “What is it?”I said to myself.


3 thoughts on “The Shape”

  1. Well done Olivia,
    I enjoyed reading your story.
    You’ve definitely aroused my interest!
    I’m dying to know what you pulled out from under the ground!
    You’ll have to write a sequel.
    Keep up the great work.
    Mrs Boyce

  2. Hi Olivia.
    I loved that story. It was all very exciting.
    I wonder what you pulled out of the ground?
    Hopefully I wasn’t dangerous. I wonder if the shape was some sort of alien or something.
    Well done again. Here’s the link to my stories. Maybe you’d like to read one.
    Jack, Mrs. Boyce’s Class, Cork

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