When I went outside in my field, I walked across the grass.I felt something move underneath me, so I ran back home then I went into the shed to get a spade. When I ran back up the field I started to dig into the ground so I could see what was underneath. As I went deeper and deeper into the ground, I finally found something. I pulled out what was under the ground. It was square and it was the colour green. As I looked down into the ground I heard a strange sound. As I turned around it changed shape, it changed into a circle which was red. “What is it?”I said to myself.
Olivia
Well done Olivia,
I enjoyed reading your story.
You’ve definitely aroused my interest!
I’m dying to know what you pulled out from under the ground!
You’ll have to write a sequel.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs Boyce
Ireland.
Hi Olivia,
Well Done.
I love your story.
You can find my classes stories at,
https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/
Hi Olivia.
I loved that story. It was all very exciting.
I wonder what you pulled out of the ground?
Hopefully I wasn’t dangerous. I wonder if the shape was some sort of alien or something.
Well done again. Here’s the link to my stories. Maybe you’d like to read one. https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/tag/jack/
Jack, Mrs. Boyce’s Class, Cork