It was all my fault, mum said I had to get out of the house. I went to the nearest forest, into a cave .It was pitch black when I accidentally stepped on a baby spider. Suddenly it turned brighter, so I could see.
I new something was wrong, I headed back home.It was following me.That is when I saw a black blob with black sticks coming out of it. I climbed up the drain pipe to my room so my mum couldn’t see me.
The next morning , some giant cobwebs were hanging down from my school.
Olivia & Brooke
Great story guys.
You have brillant punctuation.
Really enjoyed reading.
What you could do to make it better is to add in a few adjectives.
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