The Wood

I walked into the restaurant like any other ordinary day. I met this guy; he called me over at first I ignore him but when he called me again I cautiously walked to the strange man who asked “Has your ever hear of the ole abandoned boats”

“No” I stammered

“Well people live in ’em believe me or not” he responded. Why believe a crazy old folk. So I set out to back home the long way which I call the long back . But something unusually strange happened . By pushing bushes I found men living in boats…

Ruby-Lou & Brooke

One thought on “The Wood”

  1. I can see a semi-colon. Well done!

    I met this guy; he called me over. (You needed a full stop here!)

    Good use of dialogue – I can hear his accent when I read it! Remember a comma if your reporting clause comes before the speech:

    …the strange man who asked, “Has your ever hear of the ole abandoned boats?”

    Good work girls!
    (Merit)

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